Reviews for Here I Am
Boom Kitty chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Hm...okay...um...good...repetition. That's as much as I can bring myself to say.

Just a note though - you are obviously a devout Christian. Since you said on your page you love 'Phantom of the Opera', did you know that the Phantom (Erik) actually despises God? Thought you'd like to know.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Well, I discovered you by your review on the poem "Is God ?" by Forgotten magick. Personally, I am Jewish and even though I am pretty relious, I find your poem slightly disturbing. Sure, I'm going through a "What is G-d" crisis, but I still believe in G-d for the most part. Your poem, while it was beautifully written, seemed almost scary. It was like you wanted G-d to kill you so that you could serve his purpose, which it fine, serving G-d, that is. It just seemed over the top. I'm sorry if you find this offesive.
forgotten-magick chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
what sort of merciful god would demand a life? that's not meant to be an insult, just a question.

do you think that god really wants to take the lives of the people who praise him?

am i just missing the point of this whole poem?
Young King101 chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
"Here I am dying to live for You"- smooth yo, real smooth.

*FlyingAce.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Fantastic poem! I love it. Keep writing!

God bless,

Anna