|Reviews for Here I Am|
| Boom Kitty chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Hm...okay...um...good...repetition. That's as much as I can bring myself to say.
Just a note though - you are obviously a devout Christian. Since you said on your page you love 'Phantom of the Opera', did you know that the Phantom (Erik) actually despises God? Thought you'd like to know.
| The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Well, I discovered you by your review on the poem "Is God ?" by Forgotten magick. Personally, I am Jewish and even though I am pretty relious, I find your poem slightly disturbing. Sure, I'm going through a "What is G-d" crisis, but I still believe in G-d for the most part. Your poem, while it was beautifully written, seemed almost scary. It was like you wanted G-d to kill you so that you could serve his purpose, which it fine, serving G-d, that is. It just seemed over the top. I'm sorry if you find this offesive.
| forgotten-magick chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
what sort of merciful god would demand a life? that's not meant to be an insult, just a question.
do you think that god really wants to take the lives of the people who praise him?
am i just missing the point of this whole poem?
| Young King101 chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
"Here I am dying to live for You"- smooth yo, real smooth.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Fantastic poem! I love it. Keep writing!