Reviews for Imaginary Fiance
whatdotheydream chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is EXTREMELY INTERESTING! I hope you update soon!
Squidpoo chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Aw this is very cute! I really like the idea of imaginary world that they are just waiting for you to think of them! I want to know more of what the girl's mother does xD and I like her name too! Please update soon!
bumblevee chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
You haven't updated . . . in three years. So this might be sorta useless, but anyway, UPDATE!

XOXO Anne
DELETE MY ACC chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
ooh

i think i'm getting to like Kai _

continue (een if the chapters are short)
MistyRose14 chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
wow, this is such a great idea and has a lot of potential! but there are a few things you could do to improve...like putting in some missing question marks, and keeping it all in one point of view (you briefly switched to third for one paragraph). anyways, i loved it and hope to read more soon!
fairy tale fanatic chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!.
Tangerine Tickle chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Wow, this is probably the most ORIGINAL orginal fiction I've seen so far! And your writing style of mostly dialogue is actually fun to read. :) However, *dun dun dun!* the part where Elizabeth decks :p Kai after he kisses her, you seemed to suddenly change from first to third-person. Also, if you're going to have Elizabeth tell the story, I don't think it would be right to include other characters' thoughts beside her own. I mean, she can't read others' thoughts. . .or CAN she. . .? o.O Well, anyway, keep up the good work - I can't wait to find out how this will all turn out! :D

~Tangerine Tickle~
Maiya chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Woohoo! I love this! A very unique concept, I must say. I would love to see how you would present it.