Reviews for Imaginary Fiance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is EXTREMELY INTERESTING! I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw this is very cute! I really like the idea of imaginary world that they are just waiting for you to think of them! I want to know more of what the girl's mother does xD and I like her name too! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You haven't updated . . . in three years. So this might be sorta useless, but anyway, UPDATE! XOXO Anne |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh i think i'm getting to like Kai _ continue (een if the chapters are short) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this is such a great idea and has a lot of potential! but there are a few things you could do to improve...like putting in some missing question marks, and keeping it all in one point of view (you briefly switched to third for one paragraph). anyways, i loved it and hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() Great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is probably the most ORIGINAL orginal fiction I've seen so far! And your writing style of mostly dialogue is actually fun to read. :) However, *dun dun dun!* the part where Elizabeth decks :p Kai after he kisses her, you seemed to suddenly change from first to third-person. Also, if you're going to have Elizabeth tell the story, I don't think it would be right to include other characters' thoughts beside her own. I mean, she can't read others' thoughts. . .or CAN she. . .? o.O Well, anyway, keep up the good work - I can't wait to find out how this will all turn out! :D ~Tangerine Tickle~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woohoo! I love this! A very unique concept, I must say. I would love to see how you would present it. |