|Reviews for Lurid in its sacrifices|
| Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
I lvoed the last five lines...they just...to me, they held the most powerful meanings. You did a wonderful job.
Morbid Maxwell-The more you hurt me, the more I love you.
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
well done...i know how this feels big time...i love the flow and the wording...amazing. lots of love AllyCred
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Lovely diction, grand tone of ambiguity and power.