|Reviews for Uninvited Guest|
| Anna chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Fantastic job so far! I'm excited to see what you could think up!
| KateisLost chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
I think this is a great idea for a story! Wish you would write more!
| MyNameIsMad chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Sorry I haven't reviewed anything by you before, and after all your reviews on Bastions. I feel bad now. Aw...
Anyways, I liked this! I'm not real big into romance and such, but this seems like a good story so far! Jacob's scary! The only thing I could possibly note on was the fact that everything with Jacob seemed to go a bit fast. Maybe take the time out to show us what his facial expressions are, or something like that. Just a suggestion. Don't feel like you have to act on it, or even acknowledge it. Just putting it out there.
Again, nice story, and I thank you for reading mine!
| KittyCatSomethingorAnother chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
It's a wonderful idea I would certainly read it if you were to continue
| Ankas chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Please, please pretty please with cherrys on top continue
| Im just jin chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
can you please please please update? I love the start of this story so can you please update it?
| JinHang chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
| unknown chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Please continue this story!
| Rachel Knight chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
O! sounds good so far! keep updating!
| Silver Magiccraft chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
This looks like a really promising story, I hope you will continue it. The idea is really good and I think you've done really well so far. I didn't see any
| queen-lala chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
it's a good idea. update soon.
| Mahtyi chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Please continue this! It has me interested! Only the scene with Jabob went by too quickly.
| Rose Jameson chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
o I like this story! is it going to be romance? if it is how old is Kayla and how old is the guy in the cabin?
| Dreaming Keeps You Sane chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
i like it i think you should keep going
| Shyla chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Nice idea. it starting out to sound really good!