Reviews for Drown
Syren of the Sky chapter 4 . 7/17/2005
disgust at the past-strong enough to strangle it. well done, nice series.
Syren of the Sky chapter 3 . 7/17/2005
the anger begins to show in the wish for the scar to fade.
Syren of the Sky chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
"i creid a river-you demanded an ocean"... wow-sets tthe tone for the entire piece. very strong.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 4 . 7/7/2005
Poignant and honest.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 3 . 7/7/2005
Nice metaphor with the scar.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 7/7/2005
I love this theme of the sea incorporated with life.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Nice first two lines. Powerful.
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 4 . 7/7/2005
Life is beauty wheather it be in happiness or in pain. there are many diferent kinds of beauty
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 3 . 7/7/2005
so im guessing that this person was not so good.
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 2 . 7/7/2005
neat poem thingy
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
who is this person doing the demanding?