|Reviews for Even in Death|
| Crazy Biene chapter 2 . 1/22/2006
dang grl, talk bout suspense! U gotta update this!
yup, I'm back, lol.
| Kenya chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Very good. Rather suspenseful and action-filled beginning. I'm sure there are other peeps like me that will be angry if you discontinue it. also, good show on the grammatic and spelling skills; you are improving (thanks to my perfectionism? ha ha) greatly (i sound like an old sensei!) the only friendly criticism i can think of is the choppy-sounding use of things like "slowly yet surely" and "tightly yet securely" that kinda break the flow of the sentence. That is all.
| Blue Flamed Phoenix chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
I like it you should definitly continue!