Reviews for Blue Fields
silverbluu chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
I like the last part where you add in the fibers. The pool metaphor was interesting, and I like the idea of a rock being thrown in. Write on
Amara the Warrior chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
This is great! I love the last line. Keep up the good work.
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Differnt, and the blue pools was a good metaphor.
Moonbeam Elegance chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
hey :) thanx for the reviews:this poem is beautiful,someone reviewed saying that they were glad u could write happy poetry or somthing,and i agree,its really ,even though the poem was so good the title appealed to me most...keep writing dude

Moonbeam E
my-vision chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
YES! Finally I find someone who can really write pieces that aren't self-centered, depressing poetry! I really admire how you don't sacrifice anything in this poem. It all flows beautifully, like the plotline - from the rain, to the flax, to your dress. Great job! I think you might be interested in reading some of my newer pieces. You might find them to your liking.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
I love the focus and description of the fields and blue pools. Lovely.