|Reviews for Not One To|
| anjil chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Perhaps the word scizo comes to mind ... or the fact that you're just madly in love with your muse. And you liked someone else but did something to piss them off and then you wrote a story about your muse being angry with you. A muse sometimes equals a conscience. Hmm. Imagine that! I'm new to The Press. I'm going to wander around a tad. Adios amigos.
-Anjil and Matthias
| Ally chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
wow sounds like a beginning to a really addicting story
| Ally chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Val i am dying to know more keep it coming!
| Zimbabwe chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
uh...what the fuck is going on? that makes no sense whatsoever
| octobertears chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I think it's beautiful. Maybe it's easier for me to say this because I know what's going on, but I think you should definitely keep going with this! This could turn out to be...the most AMAZING story. Your story, Val! Please continue with it!
| fluffyfledgling chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
This was somewhat emotional, but...rather confusing. The ending sentence where the 'I' person says "I've lived in my mind for too long" helps a bit, but not enough. Try to incorporate a little more exposition.
| CircleStream chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Hmm...sounds interesting so far. There's not a lot to say much, but I bet it'll be a good story. Update soon.