Reviews for Snap
Jupiter666 chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I love that last line. and the first once again very kool rythum. very nice discriptive words by the way rock on :D
Ecryptic chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
It's not bad, not bad at all. Except for one thing...

"And I can't do the splits"

For some reason that line nags. It does seem like it belongs in there but yet I really think it could be changed around. But that's only in my opinion.

But beside that, its pretty good.
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
This is different, but it is still very good, great piece!