Reviews for Triangles
se7en days chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
lovely poem though I dn if angst can be lovely. very calmative and like the repetition of those 3 lines.
Incandescent Dreamer chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
I love it! TRiangels...I get it...and not just 'cause you told me! Great job! -MyMorbidRomance
Kassia Scarlett chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
I don't get why there are triangles! Is this some sort of assult on geometry? Anyway, good poem.
shelter chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Whoa! Nice and cool poem. But I do think it needs a bit more details. I was thinking you could add another phrase of "triangles lining my eyes" to get the impression that you're making a poem with 3 repetitions to simulate a triangle with 3 sides...