Reviews for Heart of Dark Love
ygg chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
Very chilling indeed! One remark though: personally I wouldn't have used "lips" twice.. But that would depend on your preference ofcourse :) And in fact, here it fits very well within the context of the entire poem. Great work!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
This has such a chilling quality: heart of Dark Love. Wow!