Reviews for Hidden in Plain View
Rosalee LuAnn chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Haha! Very clever and catching. It makes me expect a fun story-adventurous, but with plenty of humor. I guess I'll have to read on and see if this impression is correct.

One comment-the parenthesis about the hairdresser seemed out of place to me. Other than that, I thought it was very cleverly done!
Something Uncertain chapter 2 . 7/19/2005
Random and odd in the best way possible. I really love this. I know I said this last review, but I feel the need to repeat it in order to convey it properly: THIS IS BRILLIANT! Not a thing I would change. Eagerly awaiting an update!
Something Uncertain chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
I love the way you've put this together! It's really fantastic. Brilliantly done, this prologue. I can honestly say it's one of the best I've ever read. Great job!
Casey C chapter 2 . 7/17/2005
*laughs* Wow, this is so bizarre. But I'm liking it. Very Hitchhiker Guide-esque _

Keep it up!
namida yuki chapter 2 . 7/13/2005
it IS like H2G2. *looks around for Marvin* the story is adorable. i love the sarcasm. : )
ambiguityy chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
hehee. Nice start - the style is like "Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy" (okay I think it was meant to sound like it). Keep writing!
poetrypal chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
ooh. i like this a whole lot. very funny! can't wait to hear more! HURRY! :)
namida yuki chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
What's going to happen? Interesting! :)
The Raven's Shadow chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I'd like to see where this is going. This sounds amusing.
Casey C chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Very cute and interesting start. Got me curious! I will be back for more!