|Reviews for Look Closer|
| Onatu the Dark Rose chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Your poem is blisslike a first kissit flows from your heartone flowing endding, middle and startAnd takes me awayfor a brief second todayTo a place full of happiness...
... and Sun Flowers smile in the rain
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
nice poem, great work :) thanks for the review
| Tiffini chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
I got it right away. It's a very good poem. I read yut LJ wich tiped me off to the poem so then i came to see if i could desipher what the deal was. anyhow i love it, good job chicka
| Euric's Creed chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
very, very clever! took me a while, but i finally got it. better late than never, eh? well, it definitely makes a lot more sense now. BIEN!
(hint: to those out there who still haven't grasped it, look at the poem. just look)
| Jani Rieme chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Strange. Not much depth to it, is there? It's like a shallow pool reflecting words, but hinting at bottomless pits hidden beneath it's surface...unfortunately, few have the ability to penetrate it that far...I'M certainly not one of those few...
| arcane devices chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
very short, (highly unlike you) but I suppose change is for the better? -ADD