found it.

Oh my god.

This is beautiful. This is amazing, amazing, amazing. The paper-doll metaphor is really well done, the imagery and the past-present juxtaposition- lovely all.

Although the very first stanza doesn't do the rest of this piece justice.

oh wow. that is amazing. i lovelovelove it!

Wow. Sad story, really. I like the last "stanza", shall I say..

wow - this was... breathtaking? amazing? beautiful? stunning? it was all those and more... *adds to faves*

wow. just ... wow. so powerful, so beautifully written, so engaging, interesting, absolutely amazing. perfect, flawless - what else can i say? you definitely have talent, and i will be reading more of your work. i am adding this to my favorites a thousand times over. kudos, kudos.

wow. amazing. 587 words that kept me gripped all the way through.

somehow, i ended up here...reading this poem, when it's definetlly now what i'm supposed to be doing and it just awed me...wow,wow,wow and wow.

I love this so much. God. Kind of running out of words but I'll try. This was absolutely amazing. The verbal play and form was fast and harsh and so effective. The power and emotion in this was so heartbreaking, god, it's messing with my head. I've read one poem of yours, and I'm won over. You're fantastic.

Fuck. That rocked so hard it was...wow...I love the flow, and the painful hypnotism of the words.