|Reviews for Hold|
| LiLFroglette chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
This poem is really great! It's sort of mysterious in a way, and really makes you think. I like your style.
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Very nice. Really deep. I love the flow in it.
| vonlan chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
lovin the last line- 'let go, before i do.'
there's a part i don't understand-
I hope you know you look you stare like that,across the room;like you're being watched. are they staring across the room because they are watched? or is the reader SUPPOSED to feel watched?
| kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
right - just love this. i know i say that about everything you write but it's sorta true P the desperation in this lies in its simplicity. makes me think of Mslash even though err you didn't say. dungeon thing obvious here. reminds me of thoughts without words though i don't know why
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
wicked, i love it. it captures so much really wonderful- love the ending lines.
| cynicaldays chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
This is wonderful, i love the last line. really ends the piece, you know?
| The Melissa Occult chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
I like this, it sounds like somthing that someone would have written to me a couple of years ago, not that I'm proud of it or anything, but the truth burns and scathes and all we can do is live with it. Good things, S.P.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
powerful and well written... awesome poem
| TwystedFate chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
The mental pictures that it brings up are lovely. I know what you mean about the mixed opinions, but it's fine, no worries. Good job, as always. You expert, you. ;)
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
oh i like this! ah i have nothing smart to say i'm dizzy and uninspired but seriously you're a great writer so keep writing :D :D :D :D :D
| Kristina chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
oh claire! beautiful! i love it!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
It shows a lot through movement and touch, I like that.
| xoxkissxofxdeathxox chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I haven't read something this good on this site in a while! I love it! Never stop writing!
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
i like it! seems very...hectic, in a subtle way. nicely done!