Reviews for Under the Mattress
like a lover chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
as I soon as I read "There are things I hide under my mattress./Just the phrase makes me blush, like its not a big deal." I began coming up with my own theories of what there is under your mattress. haha. but seriously, this poem was great. to me, it was suspenseful and emotional and very well-done. excellent job.
claire-chan chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
hm... peculiar to say the l;eastvery... very... thoughtful. rawi like familiar no?
Chayia chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
Ooh! I like it. I can feel the emotion put into it. Good job!