|Reviews for Matt's Song|
| Unfairy chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
It's ironic how we fall in love with those who want so desperately to leave.
It reminds me of Tiffani... *sigh* Tiffani...
I like it very much, because it puts into perspective that the suicidal don't realize, life is good.
| Kira Deleria chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I'm so sorry that happened, and I know how the helplessness of trying to help feels. You want to give up, but you can't, and even when you keep on trying they'll just push you away. Or there's nothing you can do. I hate to critisize because this poem is so beautiful, but I think if you took out the "I know" at the end it would be better. The poem doesn't really need it. The line before finnishes it. Sorry, even though that's there I still think its a beautiful poem, wonderful work. So sorry you had to go through that *hug* Keep up the good work, you're a great writer.