Reviews for Ice Cream Woes
lilallaboutme chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
That makes me want some ice cream...
Calliope Veronica chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I love this! go you!
fragglerock chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
(Laughs) Ha ha! Cool. :)
miasmas chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
The last sentence is really good. I loved the poem. I cansee myself crying over someone taking away my ice cream. I still do because I love ice cream. Which reminds me...I have to eat ice the morning...because I love ice cream...and it tastes good in the morning...

miasmaswho is currently eating ice cream!
Arcfall chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
x3 Poor little girl. I like how you captured her! She was portrayed well.

'Through perfect hills of white.' I like that line. Good work, keep it up!
youzi chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
haha! nice, you captured the simplicity of a child's view. keep writing D
S.L. Klassen chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
This is ADORABLE. Absolutely loved it. You portrayed the little girl very well. *grins* Kudos.
Kira Deleria chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
Very cute, poor girl. I love the last line. The Oh woe is me stuff works in this poem well. Cool stuff :)