|Reviews for The Desititute Prostitute|
| AbstractMind chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
actually, I like this. It isn't even so much the poem itself, more the topic...you're right- you're a guy, what would you know?- but just the fact that you put yourself in the oposite sexes body and a prostitute at that. I just like the idea of transforming into what you will never experience and write about it, though I think it wouldn't be hard for anyone to re write a piece on this topic however...it is good though.
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
good...but it needs to be filled in more...
| simpletonsgrin chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Well, i like the fact that you touched upon a subject other than love or suicide. I also really dug the last two lines. Good job.
Also, thanks for the extremely kind review, i really appreciated it.
| Rose Marie Wolf chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Not bad. I liked it. It had a sad, very desolate feel to it..which made it all the more heartwrenching. Good job. Take care and keep writing.
P.S. Thanks for reviewing some of my poems. Much appreciated.
| Second Hand Screams chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Awesome. The ending's a bit weak, but you get the desperate feeling across. Good job, and thanks for your review!
PS- ROCK! Another male writer! Woo hoo!
| bib chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
A very classic point of view. Like there is nothing in betwen, just black and white..
| Shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Good,but I like ur other slut poem...lol..
| WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
That's awesome. Yeah, some women have to do it for money...Well, they don't HAVE to, but they get so desperate.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
saddening...but nicely written!
| eldrin chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
The writing's quick, in a nice, insightful way. Sad, without being dredged down in over thought-out wretchedness. Nice work.