|Reviews for younger side of teenage|
| breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Ah...shit, do I know this. You basically just described my entire 16th year. Excellently written, very vivid and heartfelt. I'm not sure I can pick a favourite line, maybe the honest truth (that sometimes yeah, it feels good, and you're wanting to grow up but areunderage and underweight and there's school in four hours, let me get my hangover glasses first) is a perfect portrait of adolescence. -jess
| Manda Falcon chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
I like it...I particularly like the lines from and hit the town until in the early morning...
| shadow-spirit chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
v good - i like it - its hard being under age - not so sure about the line splits some times but its deff interesting graphology - im sure u had ur reasons. any way i like it - its origional and well writen. *shadow spirit*