Reviews for Death
Pure Autumn chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
wow this is really powerful
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
wow - the last line just echoes through my head... creepy..

very beautiful, in the morbid way. death is beautiful. ya i know thats very opinionated but.

keep up the awesome work!
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
I liked this piece, it kept my attention throughout the whole poem. It was wonderfully done and powerful. The style was just...breathtaking. Great job, really hope to see more from you. -
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
wow... very very powerful & berautifully written
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Good comeback. Loved the line "tormenting his already broken soul." The questions such as hearing heaven or hell and the comment about angles and devils seem very apt. As I think most of us will wonder where we will finally go. I liked how you described his hair and lips. Luv Kaitx
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
beautiful and sad.

* noelle
ambiguityy chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
I didn't see the title at first, so I only realised it was about death in the last stanza. But maybe that's just me being slow, because all throughout the poem there was a strong sense of horror and hopeless despair. nice rhythm as well.
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
great (as usual!) I liked the reality of the poem. this is an excellent take on death (i almost sound enthusiastic about the subject, but i'm not! your poem's good). write on!
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
wow! this is mesmerizing and beautifully sad. lovley!