Reviews for Albion
storygirl08 -real sn chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
I like the poem. If you shift-enter () in between the lines of the same stanza-thing and then enter () when it should break, that should work.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Lovely imagery.
Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
I don't know how to keep it divided unless you put lines between the stanzas. Anyways, very interesting poem. I love mythology and you did a great job!
queenofthbritons chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
wow the creativity is amazing, I would have neevr thought to write a poem about that. I love the ending line, because it explains everything before it. well done :-)
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
This was originally broken up...Can anyone tell me how to keep it broken up?The original pattern was 3 lines, then 4 lines, then 3 lines, then 4 lines.