Reviews for The Head of A Rose
alligater20 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Another beautiful poem! I love the imagery and the concept of writing poetry while you're drunk... sounds like fun ;) Even though I loved it, I didn't like how you used commas mostly at the end of every sentence. The setences that should have ended dragged on, but otherwise I loved it! )
one lost voice chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
I like this very much. It does nto suck one bit! You know that you should never say that your poetry sucks. For someone else out there it may just be amazing.

P. for the review
tears from heaven chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Yeah I wrote it whilst I was drunk... :P
Nautica chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
That was a beautiful poem. "The petal may fall from the head of a rose..." My favorite line.

I just don't understand what you mean by drunken you write it while you were drunk or is it supposed to reflect feelings felt when drunk?
Rusty And The Rubix Horse chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
All I can say This is an excellent poem. I especially like the way imagery is presented in it. Lovely job.