Reviews for i'll keep my wings
noxonexhere chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
holy. crap.

That tugged at the strings attached to my heart.

BrokenHeart4Eva chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
this tells a tale so simply and beautifully that i couldnt tell if i wanted to smile because of the beautiful way you weaved the words or cry because of the pain behind them. absolutely amazing
Little Crayon chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
You've struck me speechless, darling.

Lovely use of emo-tastic though. xD lol.
guardien chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
You've struck oil. You've created a perfect cross in between classic poetry and modern situations and slang.

Well said. The poem, I mean.
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
very expressive. you are implying that even though the boy left, your heart will still go on. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
LaMSaErArNier chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Absolutely wonderful...I love the imagery and the concept..great job!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
I thought your (strawberry boy) lipsmight be too precious for minebut then you-you always did know how to lie.

Perfect, as always. Beautiful. chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
I really like the style and imagery in this poem. "(I still think I can fly)I've got head-to-toe glitterdust andribbons in my hair,books of glossy little girl andimjustfinethanks poetry." That part is beautiful... the rest of it is too, that's just my favorite part... Keep writing!