Reviews for Birdsongs on a Sunday Morning
evm chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
I love lazy Sunday mornings; you've written the most beautiful poem I've ever read about them. I like your formating best though, I think.
Tears-for-Mary chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
wowzers...(lol) you are very talented,i am nothing on you! that was wonderful...worded so please please keep writing and thanks very much for your are very kind.D
cynicaldays chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
This was wonderful.

You have a really unique and well thought out voice in poetry. You have a lot of talent. This of course, was slightly obscure, by the end i was getting a picture but i'm going to have to read it again, doing that now...

They linger like a hazed .

I wonder what you mean by "our gods" I'm relating sunday mornings to christianity, and i'm wondering if this comes from the persective of someone of a different religion

The conclusion brings it together so , i loved this.
the.pink.life chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Wow. That was...wow. I don't even know what to say. You have so much talent, and next to you, well, yeah, my stuff certainly doesn't seem very good. But that's just me feeling bad for myself again. Anyways, wonderful. I love your musical images you project throughout...I wrote a research paper on musical images in Virginia Woolf, so that really interests me.
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
this is such a beautiful and touching poem. you made every detail perfect and all the words sink within the stanzas so perfect and beautifully! Great work!

Sorrow
eldrin chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Steady, yet moving and changing. Your words are captivating, I can feel them like music.
Wishdreamer89 chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
So true. Those were very nice.
fragglerock chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
This is a really cool collection! I think that (V) is my favorite!
Aquafied chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
reminds me of a lazy sunday morning, like the marroon 5 song...dont know why i remember that.

Bittersweet Sundays/ are comic tragedies/lazily destined to a youthful demise.

bittersweet, i love that expression, that is interesting i must find another word for that, i say it much to often) oh what a tragedy we all are.
Munchin chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
WOW,, amazing.. I like it alot.. talks for itself. Really really well done!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
I love the trailings of thought in this, the meanderings of imagery... *smiles happily* A fav.
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
lovely images, amazing flow and just... wow! nicely done!
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
this poem is so incredible! the vocab is amazing along with the imagery conjured. luv the atmosphere built, mixture of tragedy and boredness. excellent poem! great work!
queenofthbritons chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
wow, I'm in awe, what a good poem. it just sunk right into me. this is going on my favorites. it was very moving and just amazing.