|Reviews for crash|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
| Relayer chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Nice imagery, thoughtful.
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
nice imagery, 'a glass full of tears' exquisite )
| MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
This was beautiful! I adore this style of writing. Keep it up.
| An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Even though you're allowed to play with sentence structure in poems, your lines don't really seem to fit together. You need to give them something to make them all continous parts of a whole rather than one line, then a totally unrelated line, then another. . .