Reviews for occulere
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Wow...you're a genius! So talented...this is going on my faves list, it's just such a powerful poem...it's...ah...I'm at loss for words. Love, Mia
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
I love how you always include a little italtic statement underneath the title, effective for the poem. "our existence is a parody of normality" that statement pretty much sums up the point of your poem and you treated the rest well with your words, perfect.

Jenna xoxo
dusk orchid chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Wow. That was utterly brilliant in many stages. Amazing use of vocabulary. I was taken away with your sharp verses.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Perfect ending. Gave off a very spiritual feel. Brava.
Ohmm chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
I love the depth accompanied by your lyrical tone and magnificient choice of words. Well done!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Brilliant in all its facets.