|Reviews for Sunrise in China|
| Haberdasher chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
wow, great way to personify the fish. fantastic line. maybe use a few more semi-colons to add a few more natural pauses in (sorry im nit-picking..). very descriptive! -the lady Elaine
| Lady Glass chapter 2 . 7/29/2005
Interesting. I plan to read on but I haven't got time at the moment. I just wanted to leave a review so I could get back to this.
I loved the line : Jon’s chest was hopelessly seized by the damp undershirt that clung to him like a drowning lover.
It just jumped out at me and really caught my eye.
| waitandhope chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
All I can say is "gorgeous".::sigh::