Reviews for Sunrise in China
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
wow, great way to personify the fish. fantastic line. maybe use a few more semi-colons to add a few more natural pauses in (sorry im nit-picking..). very descriptive! -the lady Elaine
Lady Glass chapter 2 . 7/29/2005
Interesting. I plan to read on but I haven't got time at the moment. I just wanted to leave a review so I could get back to this.

I loved the line : Jon’s chest was hopelessly seized by the damp undershirt that clung to him like a drowning lover.

It just jumped out at me and really caught my eye.

Luv, Scrunchii
waitandhope chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
All I can say is "gorgeous".::sigh::