Reviews for Broken Realizations
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
I really like the ending of this poem. It really conveys that grateful feeling, for lack of a better word. Keep writing! :)
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
This is very good, great job!
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
The first four lines were really good, the rest of could use some work, however. The actual writing isn't bad, but the way you phrased things got a bit boring.