Reviews for mirror
Bressa chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
very powerful for a haiku. personally, i can't take that few words to say what i need to, and that you can just makes me happy all over. _

thanks for reviewing!
Herzfaeden chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Wonderful, it says so much, and I can identify. Using "you" for the person himself instead of "I" in the last line is especially effective. Good work.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
an excellent haiku, very sweet, i like the image it invoked

btw, i was looking at some of your older stuff again and it's interesting to see how youve developed...and so have i, geez, it's like three years now or something, i dont know, it seemed like a crazy thought
Olusenka chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Beautiful imagery, that last line is the one with the most powerful impact
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
It's interesting...really creative!
gopie chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Wow, that was great. I really liked that one. Keep it up!
Ryenon chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
...wow...that was great! I love it!
ygg chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Wow very mysterious, creepy almost! Magnificent!
JDelany chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
ErstmaL. Danke für dein review für mein Gedicht.:)Dieses hier von dir finde ich sehr interessant. ich reviewe jetzt eifnach mal auf Deutsch!Ich mag Englische Gedichte prinzipiell sehr gern und Haikus sind natürlich auch nicht schlecht. Das hier ist ein besonders schönes! Alle Zeilen ergeben allein uhnd dann im Zusammenhang mit der überschrift einen sinn und klingen super von Wortwahl und aufbau! Respekt!Also, bis dannJDelany
Sara Celeste chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
agh, it makes me wish there was more to it. which is a good thing, in a sense. great work. .
dusk orchid chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Surreal and mysterious. There are many meanings behind the abyss itself.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
The depths of imagination...
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Deep, and well-detailed. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.