Very, very well done! One of few war-related poems I actually enjoy. :)

Tres bon, mon chere amie. Je pense que tu es trop bonne pour cette website. (what's websote en francais?)

oh wow that gave me chills. my dad is a Vietnam vet so i know what a horrible war it was, this was a verry well writen piece, if your are interested in Nam poems check out some of my if you feel like it the names of them are " the Ghosts of Soldiers' and "Soldier boy"