Reviews for All I'll Ever Be
tzncz chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Wow, that's really amazingly good. Bittersweet, and very emotional. Keep writing!
happy person chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Why do you want to change it? I love your choice of words! Great job. Good recuring theme at the end of each verse!
Nemonus chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Good, good. You've got this teen-emotion plot but made an epic out of it, which is admirable. Pretty good word flow and quite nice imagery, with a first section that brings the reader in and lets the rest slowly bring the plot.
FrostedTeardrop chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
This is just WOW, it was a truly amazing and beautiful poem. You realy have a way with words.
Erata18 chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
I think this poem is beautiful :-)
ex caelis chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
you have talent. this poem is especially great!