Reviews for old girl
GirlxAnachronism chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
This is really good. a poem of hope is what it makes me think of. i have no clue if this was your intention. But eaither way i like it
Juni chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Beautiful, you *should* like it. Amazing ending, so !
citrus scented chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
this is incredible. the imagery and descriptions almost overwelming, real quality of writing. i espeacilly love: "bleached white like sun-dried sun-kissed bones" chilling, haunting and thoughtprovoking. love it.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
Personally professional. I like it. 'bleached white like sun-dried sun-kissed bones.' is a strong image. 'scored by gunfire,' I like too.
the twinkling of an eye chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Absolutely stunning piece. Terrific imagery and atmosphere. I love your repetition and rhythm. Awesome!
addie pray chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Fantastic descriptions in this. I love the line "(no phoenix rising for this city of ashes)".