| Reviews for Mini Haiku Collection2005 |
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   no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/17/2006 That last haiku is really random, lol. I like the sitting by the fire one, it was nice. What can I say. I don't really like haikus that much, nothing against you, it's just the form, but these were nice. Keep writing! :) |
| liz anya chapter 1 . 8/3/2005 Each of the four haikus tie together quite nicely. I enjoyed reading them all. |
| The Sweetest Oblivion chapter 1 . 7/14/2005 i can really relate to the second one.. |
| Lacus chapter 1 . 7/13/2005 Hiya! I liked your Haiku's very cute, this was my favorite. "Smell of burning wood Sitting with you by the fire Ah, tranquility!" I like the last line, well good, stuuff! Keep Writing! Ja! I Love 'ya!XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX -BAK |
| Arutha chapter 1 . 7/13/2005 Haha, I really love this. It makes me wonder whether or not you intended each poem to work together or if they were written completely separately. Either way, they complement one another nicely, and your word choice - simply elegant with that casual tinge, lol - really works well with it. Keep it up. (Go 19 ;P) |
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/13/2005 Quite nice imagery and sensory details. |