|Reviews for Grapefruit Sky|
| shogi chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
Grapefruit coloured sky... amazing image, that one. Wow, you always portray the most brilliant of images with your writing. It's beautiful.
I really enjoyed this piece and it was an interesting look into faith and miracles. If the boy had lost faith in his grandma's story would the Sun Maiden never have come? Is that all it takes? One person's faith to wash the rest of our sins away?
Hm, your work is thought-provoking as always... I love it!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 7/14/2005
Ah! This is beautiful! So he met the Sun Maiden. How sweet and gentle. I thoroughly enjoyed this.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Nice beginning with some symbolism.
P.S. I noticed some of your other stories were posted with multiple chapters all at once - that is fine, but many readers will consider it a daunting task to have that all to read. Perhaps post things one or two chapters at a time. It will make your stories easier to read. Just a suggestion.