Reviews for Everything and The Moon |
---|
![]() ![]() it'd be great if you gave credit to Charlotte Bronte because this story is WAY TOO much like Jane Eyre |
![]() ![]() ![]() jenny is the best ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What can I say? Fabulous story here again! You are TOTALLY my most favourite author here. Love the Windam and Evencorts stories Sugar Rush! To tell the truth, the first ever story I ever read on fanfiction was Sugar Rush. And I immediately became hooked xD WRITE MORE STORIES! Waiting for the Ethan and Sophie one. Of all the Evencorts stories, I think I like this one and the one with Derek and Lita the most. As for the Windams, I liked Spellbound the most. I lovee historical romances and yours have got to be the best I've ever read. Keep it up! Au revior till your next update / story! Can't wait ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Twould have been tragic if Jenny had gotten pregnant with their first passionate, smutty, shagging session. *grin* Wonderful ending! I can't wait until the new James fic - he reminds me of myself. *grin* Although, I'm not quite as rakish, DEFINATELY not male and am no where near the height of 6ft. I have to clean my room. I bid thee adieu until the new piece! -Arch |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That's a different start. It sort of reminds me of The Little Princess and all, with her Dad dying - except Nicole's Mum is still alive and all. *grin* Matchmaking rocks, does it not? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somebody's turned into a cynical little git, hasn't he? Bitter, bitter old man. Pfft. I can smell the Michael/Jenny from here. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have really enjoyed all of the Evencourt stories so far. I can't wait to see what you come up with for James. |
![]() ![]() ![]() like the other two stories in the trilogy, this story is amazing. full of drama and... there are ups and downs for everyone, even the readers. lol. this chapter is great, i find "henrietta" very amusing. xD about adele... did michael have someone murder her? that'd be so wrong... and i don't know much about the history of england at this time... but their speech is very updated. i especially noticed the word "got" frequently used. anyway, i've enjoyed reading. good luck on future stories! diSasteRAngL |
![]() ![]() This story rocks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi After complaining about you doing another chapter, I really liked this one. I didn't really need any more closure with the Adele issue, but I liked it all the same. I don't know if I like that she died, being that I would much rather think of her living with the dirty old guy until he dies at a hundred, because that is more what she deserves. Well anyway, I really glad that you're not upset about that review I left, or at least not too upset, because I really do like all of your stories, especially the Evencourt ones. But a little food for thought never hurt anyone, or at least I don’ think it ever did. I'll stand by my criticism that this one could use more drama, you talked about all these things that could keep them apart i.e. Jenny’s attempted rape, Michael’s issues with women, his casual sex partner, and the employer/employee relationship, but all of the problems don’t really get solved, they just seemed to evaporate and they just got together. But Jenny's character really is so nice and likeable that she really raises the level of this one. She kind of reminds me of Reese Witherspoon, you know she's the kind of girl that girl's want to be friends with and guys want to marry . . . Well, I will definitely check out the next one about James, but what I'm really waiting for is for one about Sophie. I don't know why, but I really love that girl. Well, TTFN! |
![]() ![]() If Luke is around 50 then is this close to the 1900's? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! -tear- It's over! -sob- I loved it. So wonderful Alex. And I'm happy you're calling your next story Spellbound. I can't wait for it, and for James' story! :) You rock! Love ya, Drea |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending! Hurry up with James' story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! This is so cute! Love it! Can't wait for the next story! Put it up soon! Katty. |