Reviews for The girl
adreamerstear chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
I really relate to this! Good job!
llivia chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Thankyou for the feedback all. I'm sorry my writing came across that way, TD. I have to diagree though. This is not about an "angsty teen" this is a girl who has suffered abuse and betrayal for years... I'm sorry I didn't make that clear.
idontgetit91 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
That's really good. It's short, but it gets the message across perfectly
SophisticatedLolita chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
It is obvious that you are a good descriptive writer, yet I find the subject and topic to be a bit unorigional and coming off as just another angsty teen 'My life is pain, everything is pain I should just end it all' rant which is tired and dead from being done so offten. You should use your talents to try something more unique.
demon in disguise chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
You can really sense the pain the girl is feeling. This is great work.