Reviews for Old Man Time
Darkest Angels chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Thanks for all the reviews! I wanted to read your poem on the idea of who you used to be... and i think its very interesting. We both took the same idea and interpreted it in totally different ways. Anyways now i have to read more of your writtings. thanks again for the reveiws... oh yes, i dont usually write songs to my own music because i can never think of a tune to go by. Plus i recently discovered either a major writers block or who knows what because nothing i write sounds good and i cant seem to write anything the way i want too. - Darkest Angels
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
I luv this pome, reminds me of a poet i once read about, i like your style. Keep them coming.

p. bout ch. 1 of fitting in, i was so lazy, and it had absolutely no editing. but ty 4 the review

much luvies-shazzy
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
thanx for the funny and cool review altho i guess i'm with u on that point about organising a suffering students group. anyway, about this poem, the imagery is amazing with the awesome descriptions and stuff. loved the age differing bit altho i dont see how this is connected with the title. wonderful tho! did i sound cold in my earlier review? sos, didnt mean it. its awful isnt it, having to be something that u dont wanna just 2 please some1. *resigned sigh*, oh well, keep writing!
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
this is really good. i dont see how it relates to the title. The words really paints a picture in my mind and it flows very nicely.