|Reviews for Romeo and Juliet|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
| Emi Amara chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
There's so much emotion in this! I really like your writing style ... Yet another good job!**Emi
| AlboChick chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
i've felt like that before when your unsure of something. and its true, unless one is a hundred percent sure will the relationship last. GREAT JOB. -
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Strong and angsty in the romance being spoken.
| Indigo-Andie chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
yeah people always say "love is enough" but i actually don't believe that, you have to fight if you want something.
| Sat Hari chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
wow great poem. it is so sad that these days, love isn't all you need to make it through. i love "because we love each other/more than Romeo and Juliet/but look at how they ended." The only suggestion i have is to much in some commas, just to clarify things
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
That's such an intresting subject, its like is love enough to make something between two people work. Its almost impossible to find that these days.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Beyond despair itself lives golden dream,
Immeasurable in contentment's bliss,
Emerald meadows tinged with clear dew drops,
Kissed upon the morning's face by night clouds,
There we could dwell in that Eden fair,
Until dark writhing forces would tempt us,
With power or illusions for frail mind,
Deluded wandering outside our walls,
Become enmeshed in all life's tangled webs,
To never more again set foot on earth,
Were innocently we wandered naked,
For our desires and aspirations need,
Us to be clothed and hidden from ourselves,
To dwell in separation from our hearts,
Forgetting trust bound us with sacred love.
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
I love all of the emotion that's in this. I like the flow in this poem. Nicely done.
| daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
OMG. Not only is this extremely well-written with tons of emotion packed into it, but I can really relate to it. I really like this poem.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Touching... Nicely done.
| Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Hmm...I like this one alot. It really makes me think. 'Sometimes the fall is just inevitable'. I really like that line.
P.S. I don't think I know what a stanza is, actually. Either that or I've forgotten. What is it?
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Sad...but magnificently done...honestly, I'm at lost as of what to say because this was breathtaking...
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Sad, but I like the comparison...nice job!
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Aw sad and deep. The message is good. Very well put. queenvixta