Reviews for Can't
lymli chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
oh my, the verse 1 is kinda doble sense, this makes me think about "dirty" things and it's cool.
Indigo-Andie chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
second stanza to me says it all...don't know why..
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Such sorcery she wove around red heart,

Such spells of binding force she cast on me,

Such mystery she wore around her form,

Such airs of something different she bore,—

But always in that majesty was cold,

An ice domain of calculating thoughts,

A plan imperious and dominant,

That took none else into account for cause,—

How sad clear moment when we see our fate,

Constrained to fade and let our will abate,

Removed emotion leaves us naught but hate,

Of everything that was our love of late.
Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
a little repetitive in some parts, but also very simple and beautiful
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Very touching and truthful. I like it.

Needa S chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Very nice, sad in a way but the message is clear. Excellent write.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Oh, I like this all most sounds like a song.
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
o...that's sad. True though. But, if you think about it, can ANYONE give you EVERYTHING you want? I don't know...
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
I like this piece...that's how life is though. We can't always get what we want, we can't always give what we want. Heh, as always, great job...
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Beautiful and well put together, u r an amzing poet, keep it up _
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
i am going to assume that you want your boyfriend to treat you to all of the fancy things in life but all he can do is give you his unconditional love. i know i might be wrong, so please correct me if i am. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
dusk orchid chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Delicately put... the heart is a fragile thing...
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
i like this one... while i believe i know what you mean i can't seem to be able to word it correctly... i like your metaphors.. cliche i admit... but i like how you seem to twist it to apply to you.. pretty cool D

breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
It's sad, but beautiful at the same time. Nice job!

BTW: the pedophile refers to my ex dumping me for a girl 4 years younger...(it wasn't all that random)
queenvixta chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Definetly interesting and deep. Nicely formatted. Slightly mysterious too. Good job! queenvixta
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