Reviews for The Dance
Colt chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
O.o Descriptive powers...overwhelming... *falls backwards off chair*Jamie: ...forgive Colt, the lack of brainpower isn't helping the general sing sing! Life is a dance you learn as you go~!
blonde-and-blubbering-one chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
Very scary. Now I feel like I will most definantly know what you are doing. Its so real, has a kind of dark beauty to it.
I miss you most when I'm alone chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
ohh i really like this one..i like the dance the dance the dance of life and then how later you say the dance of death narrowing's very lovely..also thank you for your suggestion!xx chelsea
miasmas too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
It's catchy. I love it!
fragglerock chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Wow; that was really cool! I read it in sort of a chant way, and it flowed wonderfully!
InMemoryofPhil chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Marvelous job. I like the one-word lines, it gets the feeling across without having to go for lines to describe it.

~Me (AKA Ty from Clodhopper)
Drea-le-Fox chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Nice poem.

It has a suspence to it, I can't really discribe it...

Eh, Nice.