|Reviews for The Storm|
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I love the description of pain blossoming. What a good way to incorporate that nature theme prevalent in most haiku!
| RubyStone chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
oain blossoms in you... NICE!
| ygg chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I like the use of "pain blossoms" and its connection with the storm. Great poem!
| fragglerock chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Oh. Cool! I liked that metaphor quite a bit!