Reviews for Daddy
Fairy in Black and White chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
This is so very said. You captured the emotion perfectly. The pain and the loss seeps out of every line. It's well-done, but it keeps the childlike tone of the little girl inside who needs her father. Great job.
un-in-hibited chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
i'd say this is wonderful, but i don't think that's quite the way to note it. this was well done. i felt this way about my mother for some time, but after i started cutting, i didn't give shit one about her.

sorry, off on a limb there. i like the poem, its rythmn, its flow. haven't read any of your other stuff yet, but i hope it's all as good as this.

ForeverLostnLonely chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
sorry about your father, but your emotions formed a wonderful sad poem -foreverlost
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
sadly, this is a great poem...
gn0sis chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Wow, I'm really sorry. It hurt just to read the poem. I'll pray for you. :)