Reviews for A Night Wind
dagmarmacbeth chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
good stuff!i'm especially fond of the 3rd stanza. :)

the only thing i would complain about is the line:

"But somehow I don't care"

which sounds the tiniest bit so, you pull it off quite well.
silverbluu chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
woa... this poem is a great example of using vivid verbs, really forces an image to mind, very nice work.
Amara the Warrior chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
This is great. Keep up the good work.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Stunning work, so deeply personal.