|Reviews for A lonely smile|
| Eboniccinderella chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
I don't think it's horribly written,but I did not feel it,it did not jump out and grab done anyway.
| Missy N chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Well well well...making another review in one morning, I'm getting far too much free time on tuesdays.
) I'm an avid admirer..er? I'll have to look up spelling for that, deary me.
You really hit the mark on visionary symbols here. The look, the stance, the flower, the hand.
I like the way the shild moves on from grief, into envy, and then a little angsty nearer to the end.
Another great poem. )
| foreverlost chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
very nice, i like it alot