Reviews for The Heavy Footfall
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
I like the rhythm, especially the ending. Good last line, as well.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
What a feeling, is so true. I love the effect of the rhymes on the poem, it makes it more sensual and beautiful. :)

Evaa Moffat chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
beautiful imagery! it's short and sweet ~evaa
The Muffin Cake chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
This is good.

You can really feel the words ;)
LauraKM chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
I had to read this as the title is beyond brilliant. Great description beautiful imagery. The ryhme scheme of the poem itself is a little basic, but generally works well. Nice last line.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Thanks for your review, and great poem yourself. Didn't catch any mistakes. Has a beautiful flow.

AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
this is a good poem, it sounds like something you'd find in a book. very real. Good job.

Kavad chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
I was reading footfall as football so that had me kinda scratching my head until I figured it out. After I realized my mistake though I thought you did a good job conveying that feeling of a rainy spring day with all the new life about 8)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Awesome work, well done! Keep writing!Maybe you'd like some of my work!