|Reviews for The Heavy Footfall|
| Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
I like the rhythm, especially the ending. Good last line, as well.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
What a feeling, is so true. I love the effect of the rhymes on the poem, it makes it more sensual and beautiful. :)
| Evaa Moffat chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
beautiful imagery! it's short and sweet evaa
| The Muffin Cake chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
This is good.
You can really feel the words ;)
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
I had to read this as the title is beyond brilliant. Great description beautiful imagery. The ryhme scheme of the poem itself is a little basic, but generally works well. Nice last line.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Thanks for your review, and great poem yourself. Didn't catch any mistakes. Has a beautiful flow.
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
this is a good poem, it sounds like something you'd find in a book. very real. Good job.
| Kavad chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
I was reading footfall as football so that had me kinda scratching my head until I figured it out. After I realized my mistake though I thought you did a good job conveying that feeling of a rainy spring day with all the new life about 8)
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Awesome work, well done! Keep writing!Maybe you'd like some of my work!