Reviews for Hmmm
Luna Carn chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
You make a good point about how the way people deal with problems define them. Very nice poem - it's the best I've read in a while.
jadedmari chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Your poems are definately generally relatable, and the only criticism I can see are the "i" in the middle of lines. Nice job, and keep writing.
Tyger chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
My dear Dolvich, I do believe you're right. How you deal, is what defines you. As to women. I can't lie, I think your friend is partially right. For now. But everyone grows, and everyone changes. And so do their problems. Here goes.