|Reviews for Letting Go|
| Jadza chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
wow that hit me.. the line 'is it when you say, i do love you'. My boyfirned/ex always says that... to i dunno justefy himself. ... its a beautifuly writen poem. Its all very true
| Noir Fleurir chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
this one is much better then the other one i think. I like it a lot more (probably cuz i can relate). Well anyways keep up the good work:)
| FantasizedMusic chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
I might not have had so many rhetorical questions to open off the poem (seven lines in a row seemed a little overzealous). As usual-taking this observation from the two previous works of yours I've read and reviewed-your strongest point is your subject matter and general content. "When I know that promises are made to be broken?" is a very powerful line standing alone, but seems a little muddled merely because of the fact that it rhymes to rhyme and complete an A-A-B-B-C-C-etc. format. Nice ending line and completed thought. However, I cannot help but think that you would be an excellent free-form poet. By all means, keep working on your rhymes, but occasionally try to write something completely off meter, rhythm, and with no rhymes to worry about. It might really open up a new field for you.
(Thanks so much for the reviews and the favorite mentions. They are very encouraging to me.)