Reviews for Love Doctor
gillian-raine chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
my favorite out of all your works... especially since i think i have the tune in my head... this is such a well written song... great work! D
FantasizedMusic chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Your rhymes here are very precise and are no distraction whatsoever to the rhythm and texture of the song. One note is that in the line "And trust me their worse," change "their" - "they're"

The wonderful part about these lyrics is that you can almost hear the flow and music of the piece inside the mind of the speaker. It honestly is unique to find that in lyrics without music, for there to be a 'musical' aspect in them. Very nice work.

(One author's thought, is that the editing is pretty messy. To get the lines right next to one another, when you have a space between two lines, hit 'Backspace' so that the two lines become one, then hit "ShiftEnter" and it acts as the 'Enter' button like most word processers.)
freeyourself chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
wow, that sounds like itd be a great song, nice work
ad9a chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
this is a good song actually..it sounds like some people i know. sing your heart out..