|Reviews for Living the Life to Die the Death|
| SSSSS chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Good start. A rather nice hook. I've only read the first chapter though. I will continue the rest when I have the time; but first, I'm going to check out your other work. London Blitz is an interesting topic. Your word choice is marvelous; not just this story, but the others as ,Sam
| The Green Crow chapter 11 . 7/28/2005
It was good! It'd be better if you didn't rush things so much though.
| PoisonedSoul chapter 11 . 7/26/2005
not bad... illustrating the effects of the war, in the eyes of two kids.. but more could have been described or written about the war and the kids... i mean, you're going through the timeline pretty fast. but nice job all in all. i feel so bad for jimmy XD
| bjw chapter 11 . 7/21/2005
No! That was so sad...:'( Ruth's last entry was particularly heartbreaking.. it's amazing how you packed so much emotion into those three lines. Your descriptions from both children's point of view make them come alive.. they're so real! I love it.. your writing is honest, and refreshing. Excellent work!
| Tori Keedah chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Wow- this is completely different from what I am usually reading. I love the whole journal thing going on.
You asked about how I got inspired by HP- well- I read Half-Blood Prince and- yeah. (I don't want to give anything away)
You seem like an excellent writer- do continue on writing. It's one thing you shouldn't fail on.